Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Online shopping has become very popular nowadays. People are buying
this
like books, air tickets, and groceries through cybershopping
. In this
essay the advantages and drawbacks of online purchasing will be discussed, and i
will give my own opinion at the end.
refers to the speaker or writer
I
To begin
with, there are
no doubt many advantages of online shopping. Suggestion
is
Firstly
, it saves our time as we do not have to go physically to shopping malls or book
store to buy stuff. For instance
, you do not go to a book
store to buy your favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
book
, you can buy that book
sitting in your home and using online websites. Secondly
, there are multiple options available both from local and international market.For example
, you can buy any stuff from anywhere without the barrier of trade boundries
between nations. Along with the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
this
, payment can also
be done throug
electronic payment methods so need to worry about from beginning to end
through
currrency
or whatsoever. the metal or paper medium of exchange that is presently used
currency
Furthermore
, things which are rare and are not found in your local market can can be accessed from international market.
On the other hand
, there are also
drawbacks due ot
in the direction of
to
cybershopping
. First
of all, one can not
be sure about the quality of the products. can not
cannot
For instance
, its
very common things that they advertise online are different from the one they it is
it's
actullay
deliver to you. Alongside most of these websites and companies have no refund policy so items once bought whether good or bad in actual fact
actually
can not
be given back. can not
cannot
Second
of all, people are becomming
more sedentary due to the according with custom or propriety
becoming
cybershopping
. As we know sedentary lifestyle leads to health issues like obesity, heart diseases and many more. Lastly
, people are becomming
less according with custom or propriety
becoming
sociable as
they are sitting in their homes and buying everything online.
To sum up, there are merits of online shopping like Accept comma addition
sociable, as
time saver
, variety of options to choose from and drawbacks of people being less sociable to fake products sold online. Looking all these, Suggestion
a time saver
i
am inclined to believe that refers to the speaker or writer
I
cybershopping
is an excellant
innovation due to very good;of the highest quality
excellent
technologica
advancement, but it must not be used excessively as excess of based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
every thing
is bad.all things
everything
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