Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Online shopping has become very popular nowadays. People are buying
this
like books, air tickets, and groceries through
cybershopping
. In
this
essay the advantages and drawbacks of online purchasing will be discussed, and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will give my own opinion at the end.
To begin
with, there
are
Suggestion
is
no doubt many advantages of online shopping.
Firstly
, it saves our time as we do not have to go physically to shopping malls or
book
store to buy stuff.
For instance
, you do not go to a
book
store to buy your
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
book
, you can buy that
book
sitting in your home and using online websites.
Secondly
, there are multiple options available both from local and international market.
For example
, you can buy any stuff from anywhere without the barrier of trade
boundries
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
between nations. Along with
this
, payment can
also
be done
throug
from beginning to end
through
electronic payment methods so need to worry about
currrency
the metal or paper medium of exchange that is presently used
currency
or whatsoever.
Furthermore
, things which are rare and are not found in your local market can can be accessed from international market.
On the other hand
, there are
also
drawbacks due
ot
in the direction of
to
cybershopping
.
First
of all, one
can not
can not
cannot
be sure about the quality of the products.
For instance
,
its
it is
it's
very common things that they advertise online are different from the one they
actullay
in actual fact
actually
deliver to you. Alongside most of these websites and companies have no refund policy so items once bought whether good or bad
can not
can not
cannot
be given back.
Second
of all, people are
becomming
according with custom or propriety
becoming
more sedentary due to the
cybershopping
. As we know sedentary lifestyle leads to health issues like obesity, heart diseases and many more.
Lastly
, people are
becomming
according with custom or propriety
becoming
less
sociable as
Accept comma addition
sociable, as
they are sitting in their homes and buying everything online. To sum up, there are merits of online shopping like
time saver
Suggestion
a time saver
, variety of options to choose from and drawbacks of people being less sociable to fake products sold online. Looking all these,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am inclined to believe that
cybershopping
is an
excellant
very good;of the highest quality
excellent
innovation due to
technologica
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
advancement, but it must not be used excessively as excess of
every thing
all things
everything
is bad.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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