Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Online shopping has become very popular nowadays. People are buying

this

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like books, air tickets, and groceries through

cybershopping

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. In

this

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essay the advantages and drawbacks of online purchasing will be discussed, and

refers to the speaker or writer

will give my own opinion at the end.

To begin

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with, there

are

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no doubt many advantages of online shopping.

Firstly

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, it saves our time as we do not have to go physically to shopping malls or

book

Use synonyms

store to buy stuff.

For instance

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, you do not go to a

book

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store to buy your

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

book

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, you can buy that

book

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sitting in your home and using online websites.

Secondly

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, there are multiple options available both from local and international market.

For example

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, you can buy any stuff from anywhere without the barrier of trade

boundries

the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something

boundaries

between nations. Along with

this

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, payment can

also

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be done

throug

from beginning to end

through

electronic payment methods so need to worry about

currrency

the metal or paper medium of exchange that is presently used

currency

or whatsoever.

Furthermore

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, things which are rare and are not found in your local market can can be accessed from international market.

On the other hand

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, there are

also

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drawbacks due

in the direction of

cybershopping

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First

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of all, one

can not

cannot

be sure about the quality of the products.

For instance

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its

it is

it's

very common things that they advertise online are different from the one they

actullay

in actual fact

actually

deliver to you. Alongside most of these websites and companies have no refund policy so items once bought whether good or bad

can not

cannot

be given back.

Second

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of all, people are

becomming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

more sedentary due to the

cybershopping

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. As we know sedentary lifestyle leads to health issues like obesity, heart diseases and many more.

Lastly

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, people are

becomming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

less

sociable as

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sociable, as

they are sitting in their homes and buying everything online. To sum up, there are merits of online shopping like

time saver

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a time saver

, variety of options to choose from and drawbacks of people being less sociable to fake products sold online. Looking all these,

refers to the speaker or writer

am inclined to believe that

cybershopping

Suggestion

is an

excellant

very good;of the highest quality

excellent

innovation due to

technologica

based in scientific and industrial progress

technological

advancement, but it must not be used excessively as excess of

every thing

all things

everything

is bad.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

348 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Your opinion

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. to what extent do you agree or disagree?