Q- It is inevitable that as Technology advances, traditional culture will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In today's world, technology advances may lead to the lost in traditional culture. You can see it clearly in Vietnam - the country in the rear South China sea, which lots of flights and ships go through

form

a giver or sender

from

Western to Eastern.

Techonogy

Suggestion

A technology

Technology

developed

first

in Information Technology. You can see 5G, the most modern communication tool to connect people around the world. Prices are quite cheap so that families can use to learn something new.

Hence

, online services, which is called e-commerce, becomes a giant industry with full kinds of competition. Young people tend to buy almost things on the internet, including flight fares and hotel accommodations. Traditional markets or even supermarkets,

therefore

, reduce for cutting loss. Culture merging is clearer each Tet holiday. While old people want their children to come back home after a long-year working far from home, the youth need time to relax in the far places like abroad state whenever they have a day-off. So, Traditional Tet, with all members around the table to taste a family meal, becoming a blur smoke in new nuclear families. There are more and more proves to reconfirm that traditional culture will be lost gradually. The government and culture management of each country should take it as an important thing to review in their development strategy.

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Q- It is inevitable that as Technology advances, traditional culture will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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