Some people think that prison sentences should not be used to deal with criminals. Education and skills training should be used instead. Agree or disagree?

Crime and how to deal with criminals in one of the most important issues in every society.

governments

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Governments

try to reduce the crime rate and punish or train offenders in order not to come back to their unlawful

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. In

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regard, it has been claimed that eliminating the sentence like prison is a practical way to meet

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vital goal. Some individuals assert that substituting positive sentences

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as education or job training could potentially decrease the possibility of committed crimes.

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, I partially agree with

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idea, which I discuss it in the following.

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of all, it is important to classify the different groups of inmates in order to discuss about the so-called claim.

Prisoner

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The prisoner

is a comprehensive word, which encompasses diverse types of individuals with different crimes.

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, a teenager who becomes a thief because of misleading or other cultural reasons has to be differentiated from other serious or major criminals.

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, the fundamental cause of committing crimes plays an important role sorting out imprisonment. In

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regard, jail is not suitable for some groups of delinquents whose lack of education and job training are a major

causes

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cause

of their crimes. In these cases, prison not only could not help, but

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may adversely lead them to major crimes. As they inevitably make familiar with other outlaws and

divers

many and different

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ways of crime they have not known till that time. Aside from, other professional inmates may tempt them to commit more sophisticated outlawed

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

.

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, some culprits are imprisoned because of financial or political crimes like defrauding the governments or downtrodden citizens. Some others are convicted of suicide and kidnapping.

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, prison is an appropriate place for them, since they have to be punished for their unlawful actions. In conclusion, my agreement with

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belief depends on how we classify prisoners. The fundamental reason for committing crimes is an essential element in

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regard.