using computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree ? Give Reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

computer

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The computer

Computer

is becoming more and more important

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

for

manyfamilies

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many families

. Though it is useful for every member of the family in day to day

life but

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life, but

its dark side is more dangerous for the children. According to my perspective,

computer

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a computer

the computer

can have more negative effect than advantages because the children becoming lazy and

voilent

acting with or marked by or resulting from great force or energy or emotional intensity

violent

. Children

learns

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learn

are learning

maximumfrom

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maximum from

hissurrondings

.

Computer

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The computer

A computer

provides massive material for a child to learn new things at the same time. Children devote more time in playing games and

computer

also

steals their valuable time and

dont

do not

don't

show interest in studies and outdoor games which in turn

effect

have an effect upon

affect

their physical and mental health both.

For instance

, my father bought

computer

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a computer

for me when

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

finished my studies in 10th grade. Continue using of

computer

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the computer

computers

every day distracted my concentration from studies and other activities

as a result

, my rank dropped in 12th standard. Another disadvantage of using

computer

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a computer

computers

the computer

is children may use adult sites which is not suitable for children

instead

of using a

computer

for

beneficial reason

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beneficial reasons

a beneficial reason

.

For

example in

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example, in

almost

ever

(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception

every

website ads which promote adult

contents etc

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contents, etc.

contents etc.

these ads and website spoils the career of the child. I believe

computer

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the computer

is an amazing electronic machine to reduce human effort. IF it is used excessively, It could turn into a weapon. It

also

hampers the physical activity of the child and make more dependent on the internet. So,

its

it is

it's

better if we make best use of

computer

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the computer

computers

rather misuse it.