Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree?

Taking
appropriate amount
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the appropriate amount
of essential nutrients play an
indespensible
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
role to remain fit and active.
This
essay completely agrees the statement and reach a reasonable conclusion.
To begin
with, micro-nutrients and macro-nutrients have a crucial role in human body as they are the basic requirements of physical and psychological functioning of
body
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the body
.
Moreover
,
person
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people
a person
the person
persons
might develop fatigue and weakness if there is imbalanced in dietary pattern.
For instance
, lots of diseases like diabetes melitus, obesity is a result of unbalanced nutrition.
Secondly
, if
total intake
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the total intake
of food items
don't match
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doesn't match
the nutritional
requirements
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requirements, then
then
a person can suffer from
malnutrition which
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malnutrition, which
resists different organ of
body
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the body
to carry out their function normally.
In addition
to
this
, not merely for the physiological functioning, nutrients are the necessity of mental state
also
. To illustrate, many children
of
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in
underdeveloped countries are in
malnourished category
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the malnourished category
as a result
of lack of proper diet. Starvation, hunger is the major cause of incidence of disease like tuberculosis, scurvy, beriberi. In conclusion, from my
propective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
prospective
well- balanced diet containing all minerals, fat, carbohydrate is necessity for sound health. Owing to
such
reason
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
consider balanced diet is necessity of healthy living.
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