Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While it is often thought that e-learning is beneficial in

this

modern era as well as going to replace face-to-face learning

method

soon, others argue that

traditional educational system

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the traditional educational system

is unchangeable.

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my opinion

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believe that e-learning will modify tradition of

education

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for

upcoming years. On one hand

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people consider that e-Learning has so many benefits which are easier to attend the class, save the money of travelling and

this

benefits

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benefit

are replaceable the learning

method

of today's life as well as

refers to the speaker or writer

agree on it.

In other words

, people prefer

the easiest

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the easy

way in

this

novel life and e-learning is the system people ought to use.

For example

, my college opened online courses recently because only 25% attendance

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the classroom.

Furthermore

, over-aged people can learn the

education

while they are in their home

interestingly

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interesting

interest-bearing

interested

.The society going to

beneficial

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benefit

for

this

system.

On the other hand

, many people mention that traditional

education

is the

method

which is unchangeable for society development. Many honourable

person

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people

persons

succeed

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with

this

type of learning

method

.It is quite impossible to change because all

type

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types

of development of Nations adjusted with

this

traditional

education

.Even people accept the

method

only for inspiration of Golden humans of nations all over the world.If traditional

education

replaced

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government

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the government

cannot build the countries in

future

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the future

. In conclusion

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while people's opinion

vary

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varies

in many ways

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I personally believe that e-learning is the

method

which is beneficial for both in learning

method

as well as upcoming days

also

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-Learning
face-to-face education
remote learning
virtual classroom
webinar
digital platform
self-paced learning
interactive learning
course accessibility
academic networking
pedagogy
synchronous/asynchronous sessions
MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
edtech (educational technology)
holistic development
practical skills
collaborative learning
digital divide
curriculum adaptation
technological literacy

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