Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is often thought that e-learning is beneficial in
this
modern era as well as going to replace face-to-face learning
method
soon, others argue that
traditional educational system
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the traditional educational system
is unchangeable.
in
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In
my opinion
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that e-learning will modify tradition of
education
on
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for
upcoming years. On one hand
,
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,
people consider that e-Learning has so many benefits which are easier to attend the class, save the money of travelling and
this
benefits
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benefit
are replaceable the learning
method
of today's life as well as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree on it.
In other words
, people prefer
the easiest
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the easy
way in
this
novel life and e-learning is the system people ought to use.
For example
, my college opened online courses recently because only 25% attendance
on
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in
at
the classroom.
Furthermore
, over-aged people can learn the
education
while they are in their home
interestingly
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interesting
interest-bearing
interested
.The society going to
beneficial
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benefit
for
this
system.
On the other hand
, many people mention that traditional
education
is the
method
which is unchangeable for society development. Many honourable
person
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people
persons
succeed
by
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with
in
this
type of learning
method
.It is quite impossible to change because all
type
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types
of development of Nations adjusted with
this
traditional
education
.Even people accept the
method
only for inspiration of Golden humans of nations all over the world.If traditional
education
replaced
,
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,
government
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the government
cannot build the countries in
future
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the future
. In conclusion
,
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,
while people's opinion
vary
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varies
in many ways
,
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,
I personally believe that e-learning is the
method
which is beneficial for both in learning
method
as well as upcoming days
also
.

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