Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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One of the most controversial issues today relates to universities must gather typical funds for s
tudents
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students'
extra programs as similar to collect a finance to their bookstore. In
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essay, I am going to examine
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question from both points of view On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of major of young students have d
ramatically high level
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a dramatically higher level
dramatically higher level
energy, so they should invest it by safe and active method.
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, at twenty age, most of students can study and practice sporting activities. c
onsiderably
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Considerably
outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
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is that some p
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person's
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istinctionby
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distinction by
having movement, they are feeling b
oring
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bored
with only studying.
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, my nearly friend never s
tuyding
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by only sitting in s
ame place.
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the same place
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possible to say that as b
ooks
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the books
are feeding for brain, sporting considering a
dditionfor
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the addition for
addition for
an addition for
bodies, Like yoga classes in interesting
sport
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for relaxing for t
ired
coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position
third
persons. One good illustration of
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is if one leaving home every day for studying
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spending the remain time in s
ports gym,
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sports, gym
will f
eelby
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feel by
positive improvement, as Taibah University has
s
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port club
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a sport club
sport clubs
for female.
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, it is
also
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possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact may p
aid
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pay
funds for
sport
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activities impact on b
ooks
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book
booking
fees. As e
xample
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an example
f
or
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of
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idea, if p
roportion
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the proportion
a proportion
of
sport
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actions and j
ournys
the act of traveling from one place to another
journeys
journey
guns
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are
sixty percent, it c
onsidre
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considers
consider
considered
e
normouse
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
rate for libraries important. People often have
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opinion because c
ancelling
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is cancelling
is canceling
some lectures in s
tudents
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students'
student
s
chduals,
plan for an activity or event
schedules
as a reason for
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, strong a
ctivties
any specific behavior
activities
and m
any
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much
of it.
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o
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rganizing p
f
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
period b
askerball
a game played on a court by two opposing teams of 5 players; points are scored by throwing the ball through an elevated horizontal hoop
basketball
in university. A
second
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point is that reducing the donation
,
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,
therefore
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, s
tudents
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students'
student
families do not prefer these activities and they are not seen as necessary. A particularly good example here is the survey that applied by Noura university for society, they found seventy three percent have not a
gree
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agreed
b
y
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with
sports activities at university. To sum up, as we have seen, there are no easy answers to
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question. On balance,
however
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, I tend to believe that no problem if the collecting money for libraries and sports activities are equal, but by specific percentage and in determined time.
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