Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people admire to follow
same routine
every day and show resistance to alter them. Whilst, few of them claim that a Suggestion
the same routine
modification always
brings positive things. Accept comma addition
modification, always
This
essay firstly
, takes a look at both sides of arguments
and reach a reasonable conclusion.
Changes in activities might create lots of difficulties in an adjustment. People might develop Suggestion
the arguments
feeling
of Suggestion
a feeling
the feeling
feelings
loosing
their authority, fear of the unknown environment and mates could be reasons for which people ignore to accept changes. fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
losing
Moreover
, entry in a new working environment can bring myriad
of Suggestion
a myriad
hinderance
for being used to in something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress
hindrance
job
. Suggestion
the job
a job
For instance
, an employment in new enterprises need
some space of time for Suggestion
needs
a
employee to be used to for daily routine. Suggestion
an
This
has resulted in longetivity
in routine task rather than in a new sector.
Admittedly, repetition of same schedule day
by day Suggestion
the same schedule day
also
leads toward
boredom and liability. Changes are necessary for happiness and success because positive developments occur Suggestion
to
as a result
of some changes in works
and infrastructures. Generation of more income needs to be in Suggestion
the works
higher position
. Suggestion
a higher position
higher positions
In addition
to this
, lots of renovations and erections are results
of new ideas and works. Suggestion
the results
For instance
, a person only get
succeed in life if he changes his lifestyle, working schedule and theme which is an Suggestion
only gets
has only got
indispensible
part of the modern world.
In conclusion, from my prospective both view points have some benefits. not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
However
, I believe that alteration in work patterns and changes in lifestyles and opinions of people are necessary for positive developments.Submitted by bt6683736 on
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