Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (HERE WE HAVE A SINGLE STATEMENT AND WE NEED TO GIVE OUR OPINION)

Beating children has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society.These people believe that beating children is the most correct way to discipline.

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essay will argue why I completely disagree with the above statement. Primarily

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understand why some individuals like parents and teachers think that beating children can be effective because they feel that beating will make them f

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of losing their pride and respect among peers

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the instant control over the

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does make them think that they have disciplined the

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they argue that

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even the worst behaved prisoners are controlled by power in prisons and

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kind of punishment should work for misbehaving children too. Despite,

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he above mentioned argument physical punishment will produce a

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can have long term adverse effects on a

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's personality and mental health.Punishing a

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will

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have a tremendous effect on his/her education and confidence.

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argue a

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makes a mistake by shouting in the school at a fellow classmate and the tutor caught him red handed during the incident and if the class tutor starts beating

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of advising what’s right and w

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wrong, then

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the

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will follow the same method when he grows up because

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the child

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will lose the sense of empathy to fellow citizens because he was taught differently

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is the responsibility of the tutor to show mercy and forgive or pardon the

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with a warning and advice if not

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can bring about

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complications regarding his/her behaviour after they become adults in the future. To conclude, I completely disagree that physical punishment for children will not bring about any discipline in the long term though it can only make the

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quiet for v

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a very short time

which is unfavourable on all grounds to c

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the child's

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mental and personality and confidence.