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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

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There is the ongoing discussion whether or not
job
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satisfaction
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 is essential for individual’s well-being. Since most people spend a considerable amount of time
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at
work
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 and
job
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satisfaction
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 indeed is important.
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the various factors
 contributing for
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fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
 and extent of rational assumptions
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about
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work environment
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the work environment
work environments
. Several factors contribute
job
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satisfaction
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 to individual’s well-being.
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, a good compensation package is on top of the list, because with the increased expenses in the country, a good salary with benefits acts as a long term
savior
a person who rescues you from harm or danger
saviour
Saviour
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 for a family person.
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, the proximity of
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 location to one’s residence benefits the health status of the individual.
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, in
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the summer
 travelling long distances results in sunstroke.
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, providing adequate
leaves
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
levels
 decrease the stress of individual and improve the quality of product of the company in the long run.
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, every person works
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with
 different prospective.
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, it is not rational for everyone to feel satisfied with their
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, because people’s expectation from their employers are much higher than the reality,
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 they have often complained that the salaries and benefits are insufficient to meet their needs.
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, a survey conducted in Thailand factory demonstrated that even though the individual’s received the competitive salaries yet most of them were unhappy. To sum up,
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satisfaction
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 plays an essential role in the well-being of from great income package, to
work
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 locations and leave policies.
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, it is not clear whether it is realistic to expect
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 fulfilment since every individual has their own incentives of working.
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