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Online education and training is becoming increasing popular in business world. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

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Online training has gained some remarkable degree of popularity in the world, most especially in the area of business. The above mentioned form of learning is especially common among the young business owners who are often unable to attend regular workshops and trainings. Unfortunately, the elderly are not left out. The development is a result of the technological growth that has ravished the business sector. Business transactions can easily be done by a single click on gadgets like phones, laptops and desktop computers, thereby requiring only connection to an internet source. For online transactions and trades to run smoothly, there is the need for proper tutelage and adequate training. There are many benefits of online tutoring and training, which include flexibility, easy accessibility and affordability. Individuals are able to complete the training at their own pace, without having to attend class regularly, while having access to a wide range of learning and training materials online and at an affordable price. Another benefit of online learning is that it allows for as many people as possible to be trained without prejudice or gender and age barrier. Online teaching and training has its own shortcoming.Most skills need hands on demonstration and practical in order for the trainees to comprehend easily. There is the need for supportive supervision and post training evaluation, which is not feasible in online method of education and training.

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