News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

#news #stories #tv #newspapers #pictures #people

I totally agree with

point

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the point

: “Pictures are more effective than words in news stories on TV and in newspapers.”

Firstly

, Pictures are

help

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helping

readers easier in imagining drawing,

for

example

Accept comma addition

example, instead

instead

of describing detail real characters with many words and sometimes it does not go anywhere, we just insert an image of him or her, everything become more simple. Especially in finding people news, providing

image

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images

of people who are looking for is required.

Secondly

people brain

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the person's brain

person's brain

save

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saves

pictures longer than words so everyone will remember stories longer and longer if it is revised by us in the near future. Using pictures frequently in news stories on TV and in newspapers is not a coincidence.

Perhap

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Perhaps

writers

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the writers

have already saw

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have already seen

its effect and useful during their experience.

Mon Dec 30 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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127 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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