Today, people can use the internet to learn about the culture and lifestyle of the people of other countries. So, there is no need to travel to other countries to learn their culture. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that nowadays people can find a lot of information online about the
culture
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and lifestyle of foreigners. While I agree that
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internet
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the internet
can be useful to some extent to learn about another
culture
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, it cannot match what a person can learn by actually visiting a
country
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. The main reason why I believe that travelling to a
country
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is a must to learn about its
culture
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, is that learning about a
culture
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from the
internet
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is just not the same. Experiencing a
culture
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in reality is totally different. People expose themselves to foreigners and lifestyles that are usually totally different to what they find back home. They visit museums, meet new people and try out completely different cuisines. There are
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some nuances in every
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, which can never be expressed in words or shown in a video. So, real
culture
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is much more than what the
internet
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can show.
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,
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the differences between
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the two countries
might not be that different, every new
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people visit teaches them to appreciate new cultures. Travelling abroad makes people more broad-minded and more accepting of new things. Reading about a
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in a book or watching a video
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can never bring about that appreciation.
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this
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, travelling is just not about learning
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, it makes us patient, it makes us try new things, it teaches us how to make friends out of strangers, it is so much more. Admittedly,
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the internet
can be an alternative if a person is curious to learn about another
culture
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but cannot afford visiting the
country
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. In the same way, it can be
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an effective solution
for people who cannot travel due to physical ailments. A person can certainly get an idea about a foreign
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by watching their movies on the
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or by reading online travel blogs. To conclude,
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the internet
is
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a vast source
of
knowledge including
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knowledge, including
information about other
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’s
culture
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and traditions, it can never be the same as learning about a
culture
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by actually experiencing it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenient
  • explore
  • immersion
  • interactions
  • customs
  • traditions
  • superficial
  • depth of knowledge
  • sole source
  • cultural empathy
  • understanding
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