Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

I would prefer to disagree with the statement that the Individuals can do nothing to improve the
environment
.
Moreover
, the power to do that only resides with the Government and large companies is a highly underrated statement. Both the Government and the large companies consist of individuals like you and me. Though they represent a system or a uniform cooperation, they are still run by individual citizens who are equally responsible in improving our
environment
. But it is definitely possible for an individual who is neither a part of the Government nor a company to contribute to the improvement of the
environment
. As our
honorable
not disposed to cheat or defraud; not deceptive or fraudulent
honourable
PM Modi
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PM, Modi
campaigned to support for a ‘
Swach
a sample piece of cloth
Swatch
Bharat’ meaning clean India. The true idea behind
this
campaign is to create an awareness among the
individuals especially
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individuals, especially
the rural Indian population to keep their residential surroundings (
environment
) clean. So that group of clean houses would form a clean community, a group of clean communities would reflect as clean town and it invariably resonates to the concept of clean India eventually. So as we can see, it all starts with an individual. Irrespective of any number of campaigns or investments by Governments and Companies respectively, it’s the impact that an individual creates
that is
going to make the change for a clean
environment
. A polluted
environment
would
also
give
raise
move upward
rise
to
unhygienic
conditions which are again impacting the individuals in the form of infections and diseases. There was a case in UP district where there
was
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were
outside defecation predominant in a village, and a
women
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woman
from
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
village who newly got married to a man in that village refused to reside with him in the house because she was not comfortable with outside defecation. As a matter of fact, she even went to an extent to divorce him until a Toilet was constructed in that house. It was
then
that the man decided to convince his family and villagers to construct a Toilet in their respective houses to avoid outside defecation, its
unhygienic
consequences and the need to provide a clean
environment
to the future generations.
This
is a great example of how an individual can create a difference in his personal life as well as in the life of people around him.
This
true story motivated a
millions
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million
of rural dwellers to construct a toilet in their house and support for a clean
environment
after it was made even popular by making a movie out
on
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of
it. Even the Indian Government decided to construct free toilets for public use at many towns and villages. So one man can make a difference not only to the people around
him but
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him, but
also
the entire nation with the belief of a clean
environment
.

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