Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improvising road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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think
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thinks
srtict
rules and punishments leads to a reduction in the number of traffic accidents Correct your spelling
strict
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the majority
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is
favor
of improving road safety.Each view has its own merits. From the majority point of view, road safety should be prioritised rather than taking action after the fact.Posting speed limits,school zones, crossings and danger signs in Change the spelling
favour
accident prone
areas ,construction of better roads and proper Add a hyphen
accident-prone
maintainance
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maintenance
supervison
of both traffic and street lights Correct your spelling
supervision
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etcetera
however
the crucial part is played by the person in the driver seat and their awareness. Organising events, posting banners, advertising
the Correct word choice
and advertising
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dont's
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don'ts
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creates
a sense of individual responsibility. Most accidents are caused Correct subject-verb agreement
create
due to
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nature of the drivers. there is Add a hyphen
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huge rise in alcohol and substance Change the article
a
abuse related
accidents. The idea behind Add a hyphen
abuse-related
increament
in punishment severity and rigidness of the rules is to Correct your spelling
increment
instill
a sense of fear and responsibility Change the spelling
instil
inorder
to prevent any tragedies. Imposing Correct your spelling
in order
of
larger fines and extended Change preposition
apply
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are highly effective in keeping irresponsible drivers in check. Correct your spelling
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To conclude
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apply
this
, in my opinion
both views are equally relevant and when used in conjunction will yield far better results and countless lives can be saved but Add a comma
opinion,
however
, focusing
on only one aspect would be counterproductive.We may not be able to prevent every accident but we must Correct word choice
but focusing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite