Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
A certain percentage of the population thinks that enforcing strict rules and Punishments The aftermath of an accident the burden both
lead
to a reduction in the number of traffic accidents Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
however
majority Of the populace are
in favour of improving road safety.Each view has its own merits. From the majority point of view, road safety should be prioritised rather than Taking action after the fact.Posting speed limits,school zones, crossings and danger Signs in Change the verb form
is
accident prone
areas ,construction of better roads and Proper maintenance,regular supervision of both traffic and street lights Add a hyphen
accident-prone
etcetra
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etc
But
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apply
however
the crucial part is played by the person in the driver
seat and their Awareness. Organising events, posting banners, advertising the Change noun form
driver's
do's
and dont's in Change noun form
dos
the
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and
emotional
and Change the word
emotionally
economical
of the People involved and their families will get people to think and will have a Positive outcome and Change the word
economically
creates
a sense of individual responsibility. Most accidents are caused Correct subject-verb agreement
create
due to
the recklessness and thrill seeking
nature of the Drivers. There is a huge rise in alcohol and substance Add a hyphen
thrill-seeking
abuse related
accidents. The idea behind increased punishment severity and rigidness of the rules is To Add a hyphen
abuse-related
instill
a sense of fear and responsibility in order to prevent any tragedies. Imposing Change the spelling
instil
of
larger fines and extended remand time are highly effective in keeping irresponsible drivers in check. Change preposition
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To conclude
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this
, in my opinion, both views are equally relevant and when used in The
conjunction will yield far better results and countless lives can be savedCorrect article usage
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however
, focusing on only one aspect would be counterproductive.We may not be able To prevent every accident, but we must our
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earnestly
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite