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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 day and age pollution is a present problem that needs to be tackled urgently. A dichotomy appears in opinion whether the
governers
the head of a state government
governor
 or the citizens are responsible for solving
this
 issue.
from
Suggestion
From
 my
standpoint both
Accept comma addition
standpoint, both
 the authorities and the dwellers are equally accountable for finding a solution.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 and foremost, it is undeniable that each individual can contribute towards the well environment protection. The car use is a major source of
carbon
 dioxide,
carbon
 monoxide and other harmful gas, which affect
ozone layer
Suggestion
the ozone layer
, causing global warming. If personal vehicles would be used only occasionally,
carbon
 footprint decreased significantly.
For example
, Norway has a growing biking culture,
therefore
 Norway's
carbon
 emission
statistically get
Suggestion
statistically gets
 lower every year.
on
Suggestion
On
 the other hand, the government plays a vital role in the environment protection. Laws and regulations raise awareness of the pollution and prohibit major causes of it. To illustrate, the Lithuanian Parliament proposed a legislation for factories that does not allow them to be near the urban areas.
Therefore
 the poisonous gas and wastewater do not contaminate cities.
to
Suggestion
To
 conclude, various forms of contamination of court in modern society, affecting the environment. As far as I am concerned, the government should contribute
with
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to
 the individuals to form cleaner surroundings.
Otherwise
, the pollution will reach an intolerable level.

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