Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and more creative than reading to what extent do you agree or disagree use reason and specific example for to explain your answer.

Nowadays, practical knowledge becomes more popular in
whole world
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the whole world
.
some
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Some
people think that doing an interesting and creative
activity
with a
child
; It can be a developed good skill and it is more creative rather than reading. I partly agree with the statement.
before
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Before
committing my
opinion both
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opinion, both
the views are discussed in
further
paragraph with suitable examples.
First
of all, practical skills
are improve
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are improving
have improved
the
child
's thinking way and
also
make them more creative in their work.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
through many practical activities the
child
can grow up mentally and physically.
for
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For
example, in school some theory is very difficult to explain like electric generator, braking system of the car and more;
becauseIt
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because It
is very difficult for
teacher
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teachers
the teacher
to draw
structure
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the structure
of theory while in
practical
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practically
all part is visible for
student
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students
and it is quite easy for
learner
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learners
the learner
a learner
to understand.
In addition
, through the interesting
activity children
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activity, children
can be doing more focus on
particular work
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particular works
the particular work
a particular work
. In
fact many
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fact, many
parents prefer to buy mechanical games and instrument for
child
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children
the child
. It can be improved thinking power and physical power.
However
, reading is a useful
activity
for all people. It is the base of all activities in life without basic
knowledge practical
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knowledge, practical
cannot be possible enjoyable
activity
.
Accept space
.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, history
can not
can not
cannot
be learned by
practical
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practicing
in
this
subject reading is important.
Apart
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A part
of
This
, by doing more and more enjoyable
activity children
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activity, children
can be addicted by it and
also
its effect on study. To conclude reading is a basic
necessary
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necessity
for all children to know gender information about
topic
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a topic
the topic
topics
, but practical activities are important.
in
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In
my view, practical activities are more beneficial for
child which
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children, which
children which
the child which
a child which
improve their
imagination skill
Accept comma addition
imagination, skill
as well as physical skill.
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