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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Traditional cultures
such
 as ritual, festive event, tales are still popular
nowadays but
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nowadays, but
 not as they were in the past. Since the development of technology, traditional cultures seem to have been shadowed. Some traditional cultures are no longer suitable for modern time, they are still important to preserve a traditional way of life. Undoubtedly, people are appealed to Internet and modern things rather than to traditional culture. Some say that those cultures are out of date and inappropriate.
For example
, Vietnamese people often go to Perfume Temple to wish for good luck on
special day
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the special day
special days
a special day
. Young people think these kinds of activities are too superstitious and have no scientific base. Some traditional festivals now are paid no attention because people enjoy modernizing activities more. Along with the globalization, people have daily access and exposure to other cultures and;
therefore
, some traditional cultures are considered not worth maintaining.
On the other hand
, we need to consider the importance of culture. It is a special thing, what
make
Suggestion
makes
 the country
different
Suggestion
differs
 from the others. No regions or nations have the same traditional cultures. Tradition is passed down through generations, it affects how we live, it makes us different, it makes our soul.
Moreover
, it would create a society consisting of empathetic people and strongly bonded relationships. In my opinion, while some cultures are no longer appropriate, it is crucial to preserve our traditional way of life. We adopt other cultures and
diverse our own
Suggestion
diverse as our own
 tradition, but not lose it.
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