In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this positive or a negative development?

Recently increasing
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Recently, increasing
number of shopping centres or malls are taking
places
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place
of small local shops and
thus
becoming the
first
choice of the customers which is a positive vibe in my opinion. If we make a comparison between these two kind of
enterprises we
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enterprises, we
can see the
first
key point which is product availability. In small local shops you will find a limited number of products which are exposed to customers
on the other
hand you
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hand, you
will find a huge range of products in different shops or sometimes in
one
single shop which will enable your options to buy the best
one
. Another key point for
this
comparison is
time
saving. If you go to 10 different shops in different locations to source 10 separate items or products, it is relatively
time
consuming option rather than find all in
one
location or sometimes all in
one
super shop. Branded items are not always available in small local shops which are quite
getable
in large malls. Customers will find
variety
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a variety
of quality in large shopping centres rather than
one
single small display of a shop situated in
community
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the community
.
Last
key
point creating
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point, creating
differences between local shops and large shopping centres is the mode of
payment
. Most of the
payment
counters of large shopping centres are
freindly
characteristic of or befitting a friend
friendly
with any mode of
payment
like debit or credit cards,
paypal
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PayPal
and other popular
payment
systems whereas small shops
mostly accepts
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mostly accept
cash as
payment
.
Nowadays most
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Nowadays, most
people
doesn't keep
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don't keep
that much money as hand cash and they usually feel comfortable to pay in digital mode. Nowadays people are getting more
time
concious
intentionally conceived
conscious
concise
and
thus
getting
inrested
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in rested
to go for
time
saving options in their daily life purchases. Wide range of choices in
one
single frame will
definitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
attrack
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attract
attack
any customers. So
this
changing trend is doing good at present context.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail outlets
  • consumer behavior
  • shop locally
  • convenience
  • variety
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • community
  • personal touch
  • small businesses
  • local economy
  • big corporations
  • dependence
  • shopping habits
  • urbanization
  • globalization
  • competition
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