Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

In
this
modern era, people had
changes
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changed
in terms of lifestyle,
patiency
the power or right to give orders or make decisions
potency
patience
levels and food habits. I believe, many are having inactive relations or losing
contacts
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contact
with their families. Busy
life making
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life, making
it hard to communicate which leads to differences and
miscommunications
. In the
first
part of the essay, I will explain the reasons and In the
second
part, I will give possible solutions to maintain a close family relationship. The
first
and foremost reason to have
this
situation is because people come out
from
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of
their homes to settle well in their life. People have become greedy towards money to own a home or a car and to live a luxurious life. All
this
makes a person hard to communicate or meeting their loved ones frequently.
For example
, five years back, one of my friends moved to England without his family due to employment reasons and visited them only two or three times over the span. To maintain a healthy relationship with family,
the
Suggestion
The
person should choose a job within the same place they live. They all should gather at regular intervals or can make use of social networking apps like Skype and Facebook's video calling feature to communicate.
For example
, my parents talk with me daily using Whatsapp which helps to have a strong bond between us. In conclusion, even though families losing their charm by living separately, regular gatherings and frequent conversations using apps available
in
Suggestion
on
the internet helps to keep the family relations in a good shape.

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