some think that experiment done on animals are cruel so it should be prohibited. To what extend do you agree?

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It goes without saying that animals are the most significant part of our environment while sometimes human beings
also
depends on those animals for couples of activities. Some people argue that using animals for
experiments
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experiment's
purpose
should be stopped as it became a criminal works. I strongly agree with
this
statement that
this
types
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type
of criminal work should be stopped. In the below paragraphs I am trying to describe some reasons related to my opinion and at the end
also
give a clear conclusion. At the very
out set
the time at which something is supposed to begin
outset
of my paragraph I would like to mention
first
point, Animals makes a balance in
our environmental development
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our development environment
our environment development
. Since some animals directly involve for ecological balance, they are the part and parcel
for
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of
the growth of our atmosphere. According to experts, from 2007 to 2015 total 27 million of monkey was being killed due to
this
we are not seeing those animals in front of the
jangle
a location marked by an intense competition and struggle for survival
jungle
. Another most crucial point would be that, Human beings are always depending on animals
such
as Cow, Buffalo Tiger or Elephant. People
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
use
those animals for daily activities. For an example. Due to cultivation
purpose
most of the farmers are using Cow.
However
, If those cows are
use
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used
in the experiment
purpose
farmers will unable to cultivate the field.
Last
but not the least, most of us like to drink milk and some people earn money by selling milk to others. Some people have different argument regarding
this
issue. They think animals are not a human
being so
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being, so
they may
use
for the experiment
purpose
.
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To
some extent they are
right but
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right, but
we never do the extreme. As because of human development animal are being used and experts are doing research work.
For instance
, development of new medicine and evaluate the impact of medicine researchers sometime
use
animal body. To sum up, it can be said that
extreme
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the extreme use
use
of
animal
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animals
an animal
for experimental
purpose
would not be accepted through
this
process is betterment of human being. Experts have to understand the importance of animal in our life and environment.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cruel
  • prohibited
  • controversial
  • ethical concerns
  • benefits
  • medical research
  • scientific knowledge
  • new treatments
  • regulated
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize harm
  • alternative methods
  • explored
  • encouraged
  • public opinion
  • divided
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