Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, largest companies as well as industrial buildings are playing significant role of development of some countries.
Although
many people consider that it ought to be beneficial for large companies and industries from going to outside of central areas of cities. In my opinion, I think that there are a lot of benefits
such
manufactured on quite large areas and had not to face traffic jams for industries and companies are more positive rather than a few problems as well.
Nevertheless
, a lot of benefits to move the companies and industries to urban areas and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree.
Firstly
, a large
companies
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company
or industries can build quite hugely on the urban sites.
In other words
, there are large areas to
settled
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settle
the company separately without hesitation of land problems.
Secondly
, that area is free from battle with traffic jam.
For example
, urban areas are not so busy,
as a result
, the
problem
of traffic isn't produced there. To summarize, large companies and industries are developed freely
on
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in
the urban areas.
On the other hand
, a few problems in the outside of regional areas for largest industries and companies.One
problem
is that Load shedding.
This
is what
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean is that load shedding is a huge
problem
on the urban
ares
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
area's
area
as a result
the
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
and industries are
had
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having
to
stopped
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stop
the work for
this
problem
because the machines cannot work without
power supply
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a power supply
. Another issue is that Distance connection
problem
.
However
,
distance
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the distance
to the cities build the separation with
customer
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customers
the customer
. For that reason, industry or company lost their
customars
someone who pays for goods or services
customers
costumes
customer
for the destination
problem
.To put it simply, the companies and industries
are face
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face
are facing
have faced
a few
issue
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issues
for
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to
move to urban areas. In conclusion, putting industries and companies to urban sites
are
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is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
while they face power supply and destination type problems. I personally think that there are advantages far
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
the drawbacks because advantageous are so much vital for their developments.
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