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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that the space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is true that a huge fund is required for
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 exploration.
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, while some believe the
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 required for exploring the
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 is vast for getting the benefits, I agree with those who believe that we should continue
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 programmes without thinking of the cost. On the one hand, it is argued that the funding required for the exploration of
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 is enormous before it brings advantages to our life. It is believed that each country is facing a lot of issues,
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 as, poverty, illiteracy, and poor infrastructure, which needs to be addressed
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.
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, the government should invest its funds to solve
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 issues before any funds are allocated for the research of
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.
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, the authority is to collect the fund in the form of taxation from the taxpayers for the welfare of the nation, and if
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 is expended on the
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 mission, there will be the shortage of fund for the development.
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, I would argue that no matter how much
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 is required for the study of
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 we should continue. I believe that billions of
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 is invested in the training and educating astronauts and building rockets for
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 mission,
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, we could enjoy the benefits of using advanced technology in our lives, which are invented through
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 missions.
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, we are using the technology of GPS in our 4G mobiles which helps us to navigate the routes while travelling.
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, in my opinion, the most benefit we get is that we could find the planet for human habitats, as the issue of global warming has affected our lives to live on the Earth. In conclusion,
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 it is undeniable that the government should spend their funds on those issues which require utmost attention rather than on the mission of
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, our life gets more advanced than earlier due to the
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 research.
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, on balance, I believe that for the benefits to the humankind the study towards
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 should be continued without worrying about the costs.
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