Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment?

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Protect the environment is an obligation to all humans, and humans should be responsible for a variety of environmental problems. Unfortunately, plenty of people do nothing about

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they have realized the importance of protecting the environment. There are several reasons for it and I will

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, I believe possible measures could be taken into account to tackle

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with, the lack of environmental awareness is the main reason for

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phenomenon. Some people have no idea that some of their careless daily

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could have devastating effects on the planet.

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, it is common to see people using over-packaged products, while most of these packages are made in plastics.

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, plastic is a non-degradable material and it takes hundreds of years for to be degraded.

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people, their own benefits and conveniences are the primary concerns and they pin their hopes on others to improve

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world.

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attitude will negatively influence on other

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to their children, since children are likely to imitate adults. Several measures could be done to address

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problem.

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, individuals can take public transport rather than driving to reduce the emissions from private vehicles.

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, they can choose products with less packaging or products with degradable materials to reduce the impact of non-degradable materials.

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, households can use several rubbish bins to garbage classification,

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, useful materials can be recycled and reused in order to save energy and raw materials. In conclusion, people lack actions to protect the environment because they lack environmental awareness and being selfish.

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, individuals are able to make a contribution to make

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planet better

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

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4 paragraphs

288 words

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Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment?

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