in many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. what do you think maybe the reason for this? what problems might this cause in society?
Nowadays, in the majority of it may lead to criminal behavior.
countries
the way Add a comma
countries,
people
Use synonyms
are treating
their elders Particularly older Wrong verb form
treat
people
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show
a lack of respect.There are a few reasonsCorrect subject-verb agreement
shows
Change preposition
for
This
pattern of behaviour. First and foremost, some Linking Words
people
think of Use synonyms
geriatric
class as a burden on Add an article
a geriatric
the geriatric
the
society. The cause of their age, they cannot work anymore and Correct article usage
apply
age related
health problems Add a hyphen
age-related
also
Spike which demands a lot of effort from both the family and the government since they have To provide pension and hospice care to a certain degree. Development in health Sciences resulted in increased lifespan, which directly correlates to the years of A burden on society, leading to some form of resentment. Linking Words
On the other hand
, negative influences on young and impressionable minds May it be from movies or the internet or peers, Linking Words
leading
them astray resulting in arrogance and Wrong verb form
lead
deliqueny
. So Correct your spelling
delinquency
people
who fall victim to them cannot live up to their full potential and their contribution to society will Use synonyms
also
be minimal. In extreme casesLinking Words
Add a comma
,
To sum up
, the way elders are being treated has changed drastically leaning towards disrespect during these past two decades Linking Words
eihter
Correct your spelling
either
due to
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unwillingness
of the old Correct article usage
the unwillingness
people
to change or maybe Use synonyms
its
because the children think their elders are a burden on them requiring constant care and attention.Correct pronoun usage
apply
But
Correct word choice
However
however
, Linking Words
people
keep forgetting that they have to walk in their shoes someday and they better treat them right or face cosmic justice.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite