In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. is this a positive or negative development?

Over a decade, shopping experience for a consumer has been exponentially enhanced with the introduction of giant supermarkets, but every transformation comes with a tiny
cost
the actors in a play
cast
and
this
time
it is affecting local businesses. In my opinion, I agree that
ubiquitous visit
Suggestion
a ubiquitous visit
to massive retail complexes worthwhile for consumers in terms of affordability and diverse products range as well as for society. A good reason to shift towards supermarkets is an affordable retail price of daily consume items ranges from
food
to cosmetics.
In other words
, retail companies buy products in bulk quantities directly from producers, and bulk purchases come with significant price negotiations which they simply pass to consumers.
Moreover
, chances of
food
wastage have been
reducing
Suggestion
reduced
as a consumer purchase from limited places, because fewer stores have to maintain a stockpile of
food
items.
For example
, according to a recent study, it has been found that wastage of
food
products reduced by more than 10 per cent in major metro cities. Another good point to consider is that having massive shopping malls brought a diverse variety of products under one roof, which saves selection
time
for consumers. In
this
fast-paced world, people want to devote extra
time
for
Suggestion
to
work because of cut-throat competition in workplaces, so
instead
of visiting multiple stores, they can get all the products in one single place.
Moreover
, every supermarket provides flexibility
to
Suggestion
for
an individual to choose an item from a vast variety of products.
For instance
, almost every supermarket sells
different type
Suggestion
different types
a different type
of
cheese which
Accept comma addition
cheese, which
sourced from multiple regions.
Moreover
, with the reduction in local shops, the quality control authority has to inspect in limited places, so in place of spending public exchequer on quality maintenance, the government can disburse money on public welfare. To conclude, the introduction of giant shopping complexes not only worthwhile for an individual in terms of
time efficiency
Accept comma addition
time, efficiency
, reasonable prices and huge
selection but
Accept comma addition
selection, but
also
beneficial for local authorities to spend significantly less money on quality maintenance.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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