Some people think giving time to career improvement is more important, others believe giving time to family and friends is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Family is considered as a nucleus of a person's

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. It is believed by some that focusing on career comes

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, while few argue that blood ties and friends should be on the top priority. In my opinion,

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staunchly agree with the latter notion, and consider family a fundamental unit of happy and healthy

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. Career is of prime importance to excel in

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world. Many professionals invest their time and energy to be on the top of their game.

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is to say, they work hard, study rigorously and are constantly improving their qualifications, experience along areas of expertise. They consider their jobs to be more important than spending time with their loved ones. To illustrate, according to the Harvard business magazine, about 3% of the top CEOs' spend 19 hours in their offices,

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leaves no time for them to have a solid, stable relationship and they

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do not consider it of much importance.

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, success gives them the eternal happiness,

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type of people thrive on power and position, their ultimate goal is job satisfaction. In a recent survey, in the US, studies showed that about 678 billionaires under the age of 50 are living alone and focusing on their businesses.

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, prioritizing career for

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substance, as the significance of family can never be denied. To elaborate, family and friends have a therapeutic effect human mind.

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, according to a study by Early years specialist, a child who is born and raised in a circle of loving family and friends tends to be more successful and confident in later

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as compare To someone who has been raised alone and independent.

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, Family gives people a sense of belonging and safety.It helps humans to cope up in difficult situations and saves them from falling into pits of depression or other mental diseases.

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, in Pakistan suicide cases have risen to 30% than

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year, and the main cause was lack of support from the family members and having no social

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, the family is the quintessential of a happy and balanced personality and

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. In conclusion, Few opine that career development is more crucial than family, while some think

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. In my opinion,

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,

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think family is the main purpose of a man's existence and sustaining without it is impossible.