Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays almost every parent admits their children into
school
for learning in order to be a successful candidate in future
. Some people are in opinion that parents are responsible to improve morale characters of their children while Suggestion
the future
other
have different concept that they can learn everything in plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
school
. This
essay will explain both sides of aruguments
.
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the arguments
arguments
To begin
with children spend most of their time with their parents specialy
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parents, especially
parents especially
initial stage
where they are responsible to teach them about Suggestion
the initial stage
positive aspects
on life. In Suggestion
the positive aspects
this
modern era both
mother and father have to work so they have less time to look at their Suggestion
era, both
child
. A child who grow up in these isolated Suggestion
children
family
or single parent may always face problem when grow Suggestion
families
older whereas
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older, whereas
other
provide plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
secure and friendly environment
may have Suggestion
a secure and friendly environment
more secure
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a more secure future
future
. We can see the outcome between our surrounding those who grow in dysfunctional family
can not be successful in their adult life Suggestion
a dysfunctional family
dysfunctional families
as a result
end with crimes. Thus parents
are obliged to control their kids from Accept comma addition
Thus, parents
bad atitude
.
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a bad attitude
bad attitude
bad attitudes
bad altitude
Secondly
, there are
some factor external to the Suggestion
is
family which
affect the Accept comma addition
family, which
bahviors
of children while sending them to manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
school
. In school
they can meet with different people who came across with different family background with different characters. As children are immature so
they can easily Accept comma addition
immature, so
inspired
by the people who smoke and Suggestion
inspire
enroll
in some criminal activities which is harmful for health and register formally as a participant or member
enrol
future
.Moreover other
came from good and caring family environment. Accept comma addition
Moreover, other
In
addition during
a classroom teacher can help and lecture where they can learn better, Accept comma addition
addition, during
furthermore
teacher always advice and motivate their students toward prosperious
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a prosperous future
prosperous future
future
.
In conclusion, even though parents’ provide nutring
and friendly environment help develop, help grow
nurturing
nut ring
to
their children at Suggestion
for
early stage
of Suggestion
an early stage
the early stage
life
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life, however
however
sending them to school
cause both positive and negative consequences to individuals. From my perspective it
is the family who Accept comma addition
perspective, it
responsible
to manage time to develop his confidence and Suggestion
responsibilities
responsibility
awarness
to teach their children about having knowledge of
awareness
drawbacks
of crime and smoking that help to prevent them from lawbreakers.Suggestion
the drawbacks
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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