Some people say success in a person’s life as an adult is the result of the way he was brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

The reasons for
success
have always
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
a controversial topic. While some people believe that the
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
person
is a ramification of the
child
upbringing, others do not.
This
essay will argue that there are
othe
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
aspects
in
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of
person
's
life
, which lead to
success
. No doubtful that parents are playing a vital
role
in the
life
of each of us. They
aiming
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are aiming
aim
are aimed
to teach their
child
to become a successful one in every field of
live
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life
and encourage them to get
outstanding achievement
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an outstanding achievement
in
life
and school as well.
For
example
, my parents had pushed me hard to get an opportunity to travel abroad to
pursuade
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
my higher education, every individual has another
example in
Accept comma addition
example, in
his
life
that introduce the
incoporating
make into a whole or make part of a whole
incorporating
role
of his parents and their effect in future
life
.
Thus
, having a stable upbringing is a
curcial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
role
to achieve
success
in
future
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the future
.
Although
the
impertive
requiring attention or action
imperative
aspect of parents in the personal growth, there are many successful people who had a poor childhood background. To illustrate, a good
child
upringing
properties acquired during a person's formative years
upbringing
is not
guarantee
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guaranteed
for
success
. If a
person
is hard work and
perservance
persistent determination
perseverance
, thereby he will gain
success
.
For
example
, John Andrew had a difficult
life
in his childhood period when his father passed away and his mother left with new
subfather
,
then
he was climbing the ladder of
success
on his own,
dispite
regardless of, in defiance of
despite
these
challengous
take exception to
challenges
. Having appropriate
role
model in childhood could help to become
successful adult
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successful adults
a successful adult
.
For
example
, many finances had climbed the ladder of
success
,
as a result
of learning a lot from those business men.
Therefore
, working hard and learning from people can help
person
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a person
people
the person
persons
to achieve his
success
. In conclusion,
this
essay argued that there are several aspects beside the
child
nurturing
lead
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leads
to
success
. In my opinion, I agree that work hard,
perservance
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persevere
perseverance
, and follow successful
people
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person
steps, result in a brilliant and successful
life
in
future
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the future
.
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