Some people say success in a person’s life as an adult is the result of the way he was brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?
The reasons for
success
have always being
a controversial topic. While some people believe that the have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
person
is a ramification of the child
upbringing, others do not. This
essay will argue that there are othe
aspects not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
in
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of
person
's life
, which lead to success
.
No doubtful that parents are playing a vital role
in the life
of each of us. They aiming
to teach their Suggestion
are aiming
aim
are aimed
child
to become a successful one in every field of live
and encourage them to get Suggestion
life
outstanding achievement
in Suggestion
an outstanding achievement
life
and school as well. For
example
, my parents had pushed me hard to get an opportunity to travel abroad to pursuade
my higher education, every individual has another carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
example in
his Accept comma addition
example, in
life
that introduce the incoporating
make into a whole or make part of a whole
incorporating
role
of his parents and their effect in future life
. Thus
, having a stable upbringing is a curcial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
role
to achieve success
in future
.
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the future
Although
the impertive
aspect of parents in the personal growth, there are many successful people who had a poor childhood background. To illustrate, a good requiring attention or action
imperative
child
upringing
is not properties acquired during a person's formative years
upbringing
guarantee
for Suggestion
guaranteed
success
. If a person
is hard work and perservance
, thereby he will gain persistent determination
perseverance
success
. For
example
, John Andrew had a difficult life
in his childhood period when his father passed away and his mother left with new subfather
, then
he was climbing the ladder of success
on his own, dispite
these regardless of, in defiance of
despite
challengous
. Having appropriate take exception to
challenges
role
model in childhood could help to become successful adult
. Suggestion
successful adults
a successful adult
For
example
, many finances had climbed the ladder of success
, as a result
of learning a lot from those business men. Therefore
, working hard and learning from people can help person
to achieve his Suggestion
a person
people
the person
persons
success
.
In conclusion, this
essay argued that there are several aspects beside the child
nurturing lead
to Suggestion
leads
success
. In my opinion, I agree that work hard, perservance
, and follow successful Suggestion
persevere
perseverance
people
steps, result in a brilliant and successful Suggestion
person
life
in future
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the future
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