Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make work calls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?

Using mobile phones
are becoming
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is becoming
increasingly popular. While
this
development
have
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has
some deficits, these are negligible compared to the benefits.
This
essay will discuss why the advantages of using mobile phones do in fact outweigh its dis-advantages. There are two main advantages of operating a mobile phone that
are
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is
, distant communication and increase in safety.
Firstly
, in
this
piece of
technology there
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technology, there
are no visible connections involved like wires,
hence
, people can talk from any corner of the world.
Secondly
, these mobiles are nowadays so much advanced that it can trigger S.O.S facility in a
second
at the time of emergency.
For instance
, if a person met with an he can just tap a button on the device, which will send his location and message to the nearest police station.
Moreover
,
this
technology not only help at an individual
level but
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level, but
also
at family and organisation level. Advancement in mobile cell in recent years, have solved many problems in a family. In the past, if a person
got late from
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got in late from
work, families at home would be
worried whereas
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worried, whereas
now, one phone call can eliminate that fear. In case of organisations, an entrepreneur can interact with their manager at any time and at the same
time managers
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time, managers
can give valuable information to his employees by texting through mobile phones.
In contrast
, mobile phones cause major problems
also
such
as
risk
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the risk
of accidents and health related issues. Many citizens drive while listening mobile phones which causes distraction leading to an accident. Major accidents that
happens
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happen
in India are because of mobile phones. What’s
more if
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more, if
a person is becoming more lazy through cell phones as we can do anything from it, from ordering grocery to selling furniture and much more.
However
, with the proper usage of
this
technology, these deficits can be easily cured. To conclude,
although
mobile phones can have some negative effects like destructive effects on health and property, it has
extremely positive influence
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an extremely positive influence
on business and family. I believe that these benefits of mobile phones outweigh its drawbacks.

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