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Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#meat #health
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Eating
meat
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 is considered by some to be harmful to our health and for that reason they believe all people should opt for a vegetarian
diet
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. In my opinion, one would not be healthy if they do not follow the
food
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 pyramid, which
meat
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 has a part in it. It is apparent that many people today
consume
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will consume
 great amount of
meat
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. There is no doubt that people are having unbalanced
diet
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.
Meat
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 is dangerous as it often comes with high
coloestrol
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
 level. The fat in between the muscle layers is hard to
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
 when preparing
food
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 and is easily absorbed by
human body
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the human body
. The animal fat we consumed will eventually become our own fat. The increase in body fat would likely to bring us serious health issues, mostly cardiovascular diseases and obesity.
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, I do believe that it is
cruical
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
critical
 to have a balanced
diet
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. By that I mean a combination of vegetables,
meat
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 and fruits. It can be difficult to ask everyone to turn to a vegetarian
diet
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 because people have their own preferences over
food
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 they consume.
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, human are omnivores, in which it is necessary for us to have
meat
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 as part of our
diet
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. Other than that, there are certain minerals that are limited to
meat
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 that
area
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 essential to human.
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, there is a need to intake
meat
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 regularly. In conclusion, one can only be healthy if he or she follows the
food
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 pyramid. It is
also
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 to do exercises regularly to have a healthy body.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chronic diseases
  • balanced diet
  • nutritional deficiencies
  • plant-based diet
  • ethical concerns
  • environmental impact
  • deforestation
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable
  • Vitamin B12
  • processed meat substitutes
  • social and cultural implications
  • mitigate
  • full-time vegetarian
  • plant-based options
  • health benefits
  • commit to vegetarianism
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