In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

During these days, people have many preferences to get news through different mass media, despite these options a large population of youngsters
do not like
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does not like
to get
newspaper
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the newspaper
and television.
This
essay will scrutinize the many reasons behind
this
problems
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problem
as well as solutions. To commence with there are many factors that impede the
youngsters
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youngsters'
youngster's
attention towards
newspaper
and television.
First
of
all as
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all, as
newspaper
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a newspaper
always comes in
morning
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the morning
, so it is the busy time for youngsters to have
approach
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approached
their colleges and school
that is
why they do not like to read the
newspaper
.
Secondly
, pressure of education
also
responsible to read less
newspaper
because youth have mental stress on the basis of their academic schedule.
Last
but not least, resources are unlimited as social website has platform with live audio,
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
Veda
in terms of anywhere and anytime.
On the other hand
, there are few solutions regarding
this
problem.
Newspaper
editors can use more innovative methods to engage
interest
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the interest
of youngsters
such
as colourful images, bullet text and headlines
to
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in
changing the concept of traditional and boring news. Apart from
this
, schools can take initiate to get indulge students in
newspaper
reading
as a
result they
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result, they
are familiar with every news which happened in their country.
Moreover
,
newspaper
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the newspaper
helps to increase the habit of reading as well as acquisition high amount of knowledge on the basis of politics and sports. In conclusion, it can be restated that youngsters should restrict more hours on social websites and they contribute more to read
newspaper
and watch
news
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the news
on television.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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