In order to improve a country’s education system, high school students should be encouraged to publicly critique their teachers online. Do you agree with this? What are some other ways high school education could be improved?

Arguments over how to improve a country’s
education
system have been going on for a very long time. Often different strategies work f
or
Suggestion
in
different countries.
However
, allowing high
school
students to openly critique their instructors online is a s
trat-
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
start
e
gy
being in a tense state
edgy
egg
that I feel does not improve the quality of high
school
instruction in any country. Alternative
school
scheduling and teacher monitoring through video are much better approaches and will be analysed for viability in
this
essay.
Firstly
, modified
school
scheduling improves
education
in a way that openly c
ritiqu-
an essay or article that gives a critical evaluation (as of a book or play)
critique
i
ng
to or toward the inside of
in
teachers does not.
For example
, many Scandinavian
school
boards run
education
systems that take short, periodic w
eek-long
lasting through a week
weeklong
breaks throughout the academic year
instead
of one larger two-month break at summertime. Overall, students have just as much holiday time as their peers in traditional holiday arrangements, but there is not
such
a long,
education
-deterring break a
t
Suggestion
of
summer, and
this
allows students to mentally retain more of their studies.
This
arrangement is clearly a more plausible alternative to arguments supporting the open criticism of teachers on the internet.
In addition
to
this
, schools should consider videotaping classes to both monitor teacher performance and student conduct. I once taught at a
school
with
this
a
r-
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
air
area
r
angement
the thing arranged or agreed to
arrangement
and found it made it much easier for students’ parents to stay a
ttune
Suggestion
attuned
to both their children’s lessons and conduct during class time.
Such
a system would
also
ensure all critiquing of the teacher is carried out by adults and not t
eenag-
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
e
rs,
a vetting process that would likely produce more insightful criticism.
Thus
, the plausibility of
this
alternative is clear It can be concluded that both a
paced academic s
Suggestion
most effectively
chedule and class transparency would more effectively im
prove
a person who is professionally engaged in the analysis and interpretation of works of art
critic
charity
site
high
school
education
than the proposed online criti
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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