Writing a letter to a friend for accomodation in abroad.

Dear Omuk, Hope everything is fine at your end. For some reason I would like to contact with you through
this
latter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
regarding the accommodation in Toronto. Recently I admitted in the Toronto University, probably
next
month 20th I will fly
in
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into
from
Toronto. For that reason I am
little bit
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a little bit
confused where I should stay. Suddenly came in mind that you are there. On behalf of me, can you do me a
favor
promote over another
favour
to find a house or apartment for me?
Actually I
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Actually, I
am really helpless right now regarding
this
issue. Even I do not know the rent about the apartment. Can you please help me
on
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with
this
? It will very helpful if you find the apartment near in the Toronto University. Let me know if possible for you or not.
Oh sorry
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Oh, sorry
I did not take any news
first
. How are you and how was your study.
Actually I
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Actually, I
am very tens regarding
this
issue. Will meet soon and will have a very good gossiping time soon. Take care my friend.
Tokuk
.

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