In some countries men and women are having children at later age than in the past. What are reasons for this development? Do advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
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so they cannot concentrate their studies competently. Accept space
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these people can get good opportunity because of their jobs.
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more of significance when compared to demerits. I recommend that people should find out their introduces an alternative
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