In some countries men and women are having children at later age than in the past. What are reasons for this development? Do advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

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It has been commonly debated that over the few decades in a
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of parts of the world large
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of couples decide to have their own babies after spending
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a few years
since their marriage. As far as I am concerned,
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tendency brings about more advantages than disadvantages ones. On the negative sides, the major downside of
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is that men and women are having babies later in their
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of which their children are at
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an early age
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when their parents retire.
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, they cannot help their families and their parents because that time they can be students, so
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families
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family
might confront with healthy and economical issues.
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, today’s world a vast majority of people prefer their works, so they do not think about their married
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,
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trend might cause shortage of a
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of workers
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of which in these countries
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economic
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situation can get weak. Despite the evident drawbacks, I still believe becoming parents at the later
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has more benefits for people and these countries. The main advantage of
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is that there are a large
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of couples who get married when they study at universities.
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, they become parents at the early
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so they cannot concentrate their studies competently.
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is one of the biggest reasons of weakening of educational level.
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, in some African
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country
boys and girls are married between 13-15 years old.
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, in these countries
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levels
of education
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are
more lower
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lower
than that of other ones.
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when people marry later
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they can allocate almost all their time for their jobs. In the future
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these people can get good opportunity because of their jobs. By way of conclusion, I believe that the merits of having babies at the later
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are
introduces an alternative
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more of significance when compared to demerits. I recommend that people should find out their
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
because career and married
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are vital for every
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person
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