Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, school is a place to learn this. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

A good manner is essential within a
society
, especially for growing kids who will be considered as leaders of the future.
However
, many believe that, in order for children to be good members of
society
, they must be disciplined from home, others believe that the primary education is a better
way
to train children to be well behaved. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and give
my
objective form of "I"
me
suggestion.
To Begin
, it is very important that children are taught from infancy by their parents,
this
is because the
child
will be able to learn faster and put to use whatever he/she must have learned from the
parent
. If
this
is done, the
child
we grow up learning how to be well behaved
as a result
of the schooling gained from the
parent
.
For example
, In the western part of Nigeria, children are taught by their
parent
, how to kneel or prostrate when greeting elderly people, as a means of showing deep respect.
This
culture is quite different from people who grew up in the Eastern part of Nigeria.
Therefore
, children will only be able to learn faster and better,
thus
, be well behaved in a
society
when the teachings of their
parent
reflected on them.
On the other hand
, teaching from
school
is not the best
way
to inflict good manners
on
Suggestion
for
growing kids, since the
school
is usually of large population, and in fact, will be difficult for the tutor to monitor each
child
.
This
might even lead to a negative effect on
such
child
.
For instance
, children find it easy to mingle with their peers and imitate them, even if what they are doing is against the rule of the
school
or authority, but
as a result
of peer pressure, it is often difficult to abhor what is wicked and cling to what is good.
Therefore
, as regards the good manner in the
society
, the
school
will not be the best
way
to teach growing kids of good manners. In conclusion,
Although
children can still learn a lot in
school
concerning academic, the best
way
to teach a
child
to be well behaved, especially in the
society
, is through the
parent
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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