Dropping Rubbish and littering in cities and villages have become a common problem now a days. How is this a problem? How do you think this can be solved?

This
world is
filing
any material that fills a space or container
filling
with beautiful nature and environment. Right now
this
beauty is ruined by
rubbish
. It is
also
very harmful for our diversity. So,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss the main reason behind
this
and how it can be solved. Pollution is a main
problem
in our world. Our world is polluted in many ways.
For example
smokes from
industy
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industry
damages our air,
gerbage
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
herbage
is destroying our land and water, huge noise from industry creates sound pollution etc. Apart from
this
rubbish
damages the climate more.
people
Suggestion
People
throw
there
of them or themselves
their
rubbish
here and there. For
this
reason those
rubbish
stays in
soil
Suggestion
the soil
over a
decades
Suggestion
decade
and damage the condition of nature. Many industries dump
there
of them or themselves
their
waste in land and river. It is
also
very harmful
for
Suggestion
to
our nature. We often use plastic bags for our shopping. After using it, we throw it outside
withour
in absence of
without
knowing the effect of
this
. Plastic bags are very dangerous for our atmosphere. If we burn it, it will damage our air very badly. If we do not burn it, it will stay in
soil
Suggestion
the soil
over a thousand years. To solve
this
problem
, at
first
we need to more careful about
this
situation. We need to reduce the use of plastic bags and try to not throw
gerbage
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
here and there. Our government can take initiative to resolve
this
. They can become more strict to minimize
this
issue. They can
also
impose a strict rules for industries to reduce the impact.
Rubbish
and litter
is
Suggestion
are
very dangerous for our environment. If we do not stop
this
now, we will face
major environmental
Suggestion
a major environmental problem
major environmental problems
problem
. So, we need to care
this
problem
more from today.

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