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Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?

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An unlimited access to any information has changed the world in a way which can't be reversed. The popularity of some people called celebrities
is
Suggestion
are
 their main source of financial benefits. Personally, I think that celebrities have their right to be paid a lot and it is a consequence of the structure of the modern retail system.
First
 of all, entertainment has become
such
 a remarkable sphere only recently when the pace of life increased. People's expectations of life are high, because everything seems achievable. Everybody knows that to work hard is a hallmark of a successful person, and
such
 an approach could cause a depression and tiredness. An ability to relieve is just as crucial as an ability to drink water. Due to
this
, it's logical and natural to celebrities to have
such
 an influence of the society. Jobs, which our community really needs, should be paid the most. No arguments exist that
this
 rule cannot be applied to celebrities as well, because they are important members of our community.
In addition
 to
this
, one of the laws of the
market
 now is to pay a lot of professions, which have a high demand.
This
 is a direct consequence of the capitalism. According to
this
, if celebrities are needed by many people, they totally deserve to be paid well. Even their importance doesn't matter. An example of
this
 general rule is a tendency to pay high salaries to software developers. They have become important only recently, because a tremendous
market
 of software appeared. Laws of financial flows continue to work according to their nature of capitalism. In conclusion, humanity has a well-established economic system, which works according to its initial structure. Many effects of
this
 could seem controversial, but they are totally justified. The distribution of salaries is as honest as it is ruled by the
market
 laws. The
market
 itself should decide which jobs should be paid.
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