You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

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Today, with a significant increase in the number of producers

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various goods, not only do buyers have difficulty choosing favourable

products but

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products, but

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competition between producers to persuade consumers has been become hard and serious.

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Therefore advertisements

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Therefore, advertisements

play

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will play

a key role in today’s marketing and so some people believe that power of advertisements is the major incentive for the market growth of buying popular consumer products and necessary needs of buyers is not very important. I agree with

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opinion to some

extent but

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extent, but

I think the main reason for these

increase

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increases

of sale

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are

people’s necessity

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people’s necessities

, not advertisements. On the one hand, producers apply various methods to market their products for consumers. These days, if you see carefully around yourself, you will face tempting advertising slogan on a billboard on

streets

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the streets

, on different types of media that surround you and want to induce you to choose their goods. Companies spend a lot of money advertising the products and they use celebrities and famous people to bring their favours into their stories. These methods have been successful in some cases, especially for affluent people who want to be in fashion and able to afford the

luxurious

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luxury

goods

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as houses, cars and jewellery. So

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success is held in a limited circle.

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, an intensive growth of sales of people’s main consumer products is

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of increasing their needs to them. The role of advertisement in

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area is confined to help the buyer choose the best products

and not persuade them

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and persuade them not

to buy unnecessary goods. When it comes to vital goods of living

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people whether

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people, whether

rich or poor do not pay attention to advertising messages that how much or many of these goods they buy. In conclusion, I think

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true the power of advertisement can make people buy their

products but

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products, but

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power is limited to rich people and

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unnecessary consumer goods so that the real needs of the society dictate the rate of sales.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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334 words

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