You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Today, with a significant increase in the number of producers
for
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of
various goods, not only do buyers have difficulty choosing favourable
products but
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products, but
also
competition between producers to persuade consumers has been become hard and serious.
Therefore advertisements
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Therefore, advertisements
play
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will play
a key role in today’s marketing and so some people believe that power of advertisements is the major incentive for the market growth of buying popular consumer products and necessary needs of buyers is not very important. I agree with
this
opinion to some
extent but
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extent, but
I think the main reason for these
increase
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increases
of sale
is
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are
people’s necessity
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people’s necessities
, not advertisements. On the one hand, producers apply various methods to market their products for consumers. These days, if you see carefully around yourself, you will face tempting advertising slogan on a billboard on
streets
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the streets
, on different types of media that surround you and want to induce you to choose their goods. Companies spend a lot of money advertising the products and they use celebrities and famous people to bring their favours into their stories. These methods have been successful in some cases, especially for affluent people who want to be in fashion and able to afford the
luxurious
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luxury
goods
such
as houses, cars and jewellery. So
this
success is held in a limited circle.
On the other hand
, an intensive growth of sales of people’s main consumer products is
as a result
of increasing their needs to them. The role of advertisement in
this
area is confined to help the buyer choose the best products
and not persuade them
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and persuade them not
to buy unnecessary goods. When it comes to vital goods of living
,
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,
people whether
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people, whether
rich or poor do not pay attention to advertising messages that how much or many of these goods they buy. In conclusion, I think
that is
true the power of advertisement can make people buy their
products but
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products, but
this
power is limited to rich people and
also
unnecessary consumer goods so that the real needs of the society dictate the rate of sales.
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