Some people think that it is beneficial to young children if sent to Nursery School before starting Primary School. Other people think that Young Children should spend time with Family than going to Nursery School. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is the
bed rock
solid unweathered rock lying beneath surface deposits of soil
bedrock
and the basic need parents ought to give their children. Outside the fact that
achooling
the act of teaching at school
schooling
contribute to the
up bringing
properties acquired during a person's formative years
upbringing
of children
,
Accept space
,
it is
also
important that they spend time with their parents before commencing primary education. Studies have prove that most children who start
nursary
a child's room for a baby
nursery
school early happen to be more intelligent because they are more exposed to academic activities than those who do not. The self-esteem of any children
depend
Suggestion
depends
on the level of parental up bring which is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
developed in school by teachers. Children become more friendly and have
great sense
Suggestion
a great sense
of
humor
a message whose ingenuity or verbal skill or incongruity has the power to evoke laughter
humour
when they are exposed to human relations Technic at their early age. Personally
,
Accept space
,
I would support the motion of a child or children should start their
education pursue
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education, pursue
from
nursary
Suggestion
the nursery
nursery
before proceeding to primary because spending time with parents may not be as effective as schooling at that early stage of their lives.
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