The length of working week does not reflect mordern lifestyle needs. It should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time and time with their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, more and more people

are engaged

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engage

in different kinds of job

inorder

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in order

to make ends meet

therefore

little or no

time

is spent with loved ones.

However

, it is argued by some people that duration of the working

week

should be modified to provide leisure

time

for families and their relatives. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree with

this

essay because family bonding will be established and its negative effect on health will be prevented. Admittedly, some people opine that the length of working

week

should be reduced because it decreases family bonding. In

mordern

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

Modern

times, individuals are faced with different workload and challenges

such

that if not accomplished, could be to the detriment one's job or income.

Therefore

, to meet up with these demands, parents

are forced

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were forced

to work overtime only to return home late at night already worn out and as

such

, little or no

time

is spent with their children, depriving them the necessary love and care they deserve.

This

results in breakdown in family happiness.

In addition

,

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,

some parents work on weekends

hence

, little or no supervision is exerted on their wards. They may go about

commiting

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

committing

crimes without the consent of their guardians.

Furthermore

, reduction in the length of working hours will go a long way in reducing health related issues caused by stress

such

as mental disorder. Recent studies have shown that the activity of the

cerebrum which

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cerebrum, which

is responsible for thinking and movement control tends to diminish when over worked.

This

could be

as a result

of workload and pressure that arises from the work

environment

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environment, thus

thus

, deprives the individual from spending quality

time

with family. In conclusion, the duration of working

week

does not reflect

mordern lifestyle

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the modern lifestyle

modern lifestyle

which could result in decrease in family bonding and

also

affect our health mentally and physically.

Therefore i

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Therefore, I

Therefore I

strongly argue that longer working

week

should be reduced.