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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, traffic is a popular situation for everyone when we go outside, it increases dust and bad for the environment so with me reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles is the best solution for the case. May be there will be a lot of people think the other ideas, but some of it is not suitable for the society even that it might harm for other people. So the best way is the awareness of the citizens who is living in the city, they have to know when they speed up that will cost a lot of dust to the environment and bring the bad pictures of the city to tourist who pay money to go there. Actually, the scientist has an intention to produce a new kind of transport for the citizens in the
next
 decades, they want to decrease the pollution which is the main situation must have a look at the world. Hopefully, there will be a produce soon because the population is
emergency
Suggestion
emerging
 and it needs our help to protect now. But, in
this
 view, I agree that the road safety should handle
first
 because we need to avoid the accidents at least as we can. More accidents will kill hundreds of people and cost the economy of the country, make it fell down. After that, we might have a look with other options
,
Accept space
,
 will develop it with one hundred percent of strength, and in response the expected of other citizens who is living in the city.
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