The chart below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

The chart below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy
The charts give information on the results of a survey among different age
groups
of
people
say makes them fee much happy.
Overall
, it can be seen in percentage from both charts, that
people
are happier with achievement at work is highest and least in other factors from below and above 30 age
groups
. There are several similarities between younger and older
people
says makes them happier.
However
, there are several striking differences.
Firstly
, let us look at the similarities. It is noticeable that for both younger and older
people
, the highest percentage says that achievement at work bring them more
happiness
: 31% and 32% respectively. Doing hobbies are
also
very important for two
groups
: the
second
largest percentage of both
groups
mention doing hobbies as making them happier. Turning now to the differences, many young
people
regard having a good appearance as extremely important: 18% of them state
this
brings them more
happiness
.
This
is followed by 15% who state that travel brings them
happiness
. Neither of these two factors is mentioned by the older group.
Instead
, 20% of older
people
report that having financial security is most important to their
happiness
and 14% say they feel much happier when they are with their family.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, people, happiness with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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