Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Cultural and
tourist
attractions both are representing a
country
. A few numbers of people claim that international tourists should be paid more
money
than local citizens to visit cultural and historical
tourist
places. In my point of view, I do not agree with
this
view if the differences are quite low between local and international tourists it should be the proper judgment. Every
country
has many cultural and
tourist
attractions. Local people spent their pleasure time with their family or friends to go to
tourist
attractions. Some
tourist
spots need to care and repair.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, these sites have a
ticket
system. Every person needs a
ticket
to entry these spots.
but
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But
most of the countries have a rule for international tourists. They demand a very
high
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higher
ticket
price
than local visitors.
sometimes
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Sometimes
, the amount is very excess than local peoples.
For example
, my brother and his friends were going to India. They went to the Tajmahal for visiting.
but
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But
when they were going to enter that place, they need tickets. The
ticket
price
was 100 Indian rupees for local tourists but international tourists, the
ticket
price
was 500 Indian rupees per person which is 5 times higher than a local
ticket
. At
last
, they paid 500 rupees for each
ticket
and enter to the Tajmahal.
On the other hand
, many cultural and
tourist
spots need proper caring and repairing. A large number of amount needs to fix it. Authority decides to a
ticket
system to enter to the spots.
the
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The
ticket
price
is the same as local and international tourists. Every week a large number of tourists
are going
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go
there to spend their
time so
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time, so
, the authority income much
money
from the
ticket
. They do not need to extra
money
from international visitors. If they
do they
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do, they
can increase a small amount of
money
for every
ticket
. International tourists can focus on our historical
tourist
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Tourist
spots. Suppose, in our
country
has many
tourist
spots.
some
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Some
spots have a
ticket
system but
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system, but
all the
ticket
prices are the same.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
foreign tourists
can not
can not
cannot
face any problem in visiting
this
site. In conclusion, foreign visitors help to
country
's GDP growth and they represent the
tourist
spot in different countries where they are going.
in
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In
my opinion, foreign tourists should be charged the same as local citizens.
This
way
give
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gives
a positive impact on a
country
and many international tourists come here every time.

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