In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. PROBLEMS - SOLVING

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rapid economic development standard

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the rapid economic development standard

of living in urban areas have

increased but

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increased, but

same is not true for

countryside

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the countryside

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can be a severe problem for the whole country which can be discussed in the following para. With increased development in

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relating to or concerned with a city or densely populated area

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areas more and more people from

countyside

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the countryside

countryside

will migrate there in search of jobs.

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will lead to

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an erratic increase

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population creating

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population, creating

a mismatch in demand and supply of goods and services. Another problem is widening of

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the gap

between rich and poor.

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problem can be solved with an initiative by the government by improving the infrastructure of countryside which will ultimately increase the employment opportunities in that area.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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