Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

There are

lot

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lots

of countries have been in

low

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low levels

a low level

the low level

level

of the economical

level

at the same time, most of

contries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

are in

developed

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development

developing

.

some

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Some

of them being

help

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helped

to the poor countries

,

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,

however still

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however, still

they

can not

can not

cannot

upgrade their poverty

level

, if developed countries help to them in various

way

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ways

, it may be

support

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supported

to bring it up.

Initially

, most of developed countries give a moral support to other states

hiddenly

by donating

money but

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money, but

these are not working because of some

currptions

lack of integrity or honesty (especially susceptibility to bribery); use of a position of trust for dishonest gain

corruption

and political issues. For

intance

an occurrence of something

instance

, some of

African countries

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the African countries

are often getting money from others either lending or donation, by the way, they could not

decreae

state emphatically and authoritatively

declare

their poverty

level

.

Moreover

, that

countrie's

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country's

countries

presedents

an executive officer of a firm or corporation

president

should identify the

solutionsto

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solutions to

raise their

countries

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countries'

country's

economical

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economic

level

and have to

moov

change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically

move

on

new way

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the new way

. The recent researches illustrate the reasons for the poverty of these countries; mainly lack of vacancies, sudden climate changes, over

cosumption

the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)

consumption

of

nature

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natural

resorces

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

and economical decline;

therefore

, while

donars

person who makes a gift of property

donors

change their helping

methodes

a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)

methods

, poor states might recover their problems.

For example

, giving

permenant

continuing or enduring without marked change in status or condition or place

permanent

working permit in richer place to earn much more,

decline the

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decline, the

rate of taxes and import things from these

sort

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sorts

of countries. In my view, everyone should aware for

this

situation not only countries but peoples, due to we

can not

can not

cannot

say what is happening

next

minute so, we help to all in all ways with pleasant mind.