Some people say it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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topic today relates to people accepting or rejecting some

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not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

circumstances. While it is believed by some individuals that

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status ought to be accepted, others feel attempts should be made to turn around

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situations. Those that support leaving a distasteful condition as it believed that it is only a natural phenomenon which is bound to change sooner or later.

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is because, as they say, change is constant, and it only creates stress when an attempt is made to undo it. A case in point is my uncle, who worked as a janitor despite having a university degree. He

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got promoted to the level of a manager after five years,

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he had attempted to alter might not have been achievable.

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, it is thought by others that all efforts must be made to bring positive effects. The main reason is that individuals could improve their standard of living by forcing a change. A particularly good example is Bill Gates, the wealthiest man on earth, who was born into abject

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poverty, but

made committed efforts to turn the situation around. Not only

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, could the general public benefit from striving for betterment? Certainly yes. Should individuals successfully improve their living conditions, not only would they benefit, but the country would

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enjoy a booming economy

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as it is seen in the United States. In conclusion, I believe that people should

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a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

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to right every wrong they find themselves.

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is because choosing to live with a terrible situation is deleterious and

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unlikely to yield any positive outcome. It is

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imperative to make concerted willpower to improve these circumstances as both individuals and the society stand to gain from it.