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In some countries there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work not at home. Do you agree or disagree.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Although
 having a gap of a year between the high school and a university for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 or work is beneficial for teenagers. It
also
 has some drawbacks too. In
this
 essay, I
will discuss the both
Suggestion
will discuss both the
 sides.
Firstly
, A positive aspect of being involved in work before the higher education in adolescent it that it helps them to acquire the desired working experience which not only enhances their personality as well as their interpersonal skills which lead them to gain a better working career.
For instance
, most of
companies
Suggestion
the companies
 prefer candidates who have prior experience.
Secondly
, it makes them more sense in managing the financial
budget which
Accept comma addition
budget, which
 makes them responsible while working they can understand the value of money which is very crucial to
lead a better future
Suggestion
lead to a better future
.
On the other hand
, after a year
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 without studying, they might find difficulty in focusing studies which can create a problem in their academics. It is axiomatic that to lead a successful career would need a strong academic foundation. Another problematic reason is that while working and earning they might lose their interest in studies.
For example
, some people get satisfied with their jobs because of
this
, they do not opt for higher education.
Being working
Suggestion
Has been working
Been working
 and gaining
a
Suggestion
an
 experience before getting enrolled in universities can benefit them,
However
, it
also
 creates obstacles in continuing the
further
 studies.
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