You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about a delivery service that I received from your firm recently. Two days before, I purchased an order of Hair Removal cream from your company website.Since I was

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member I got delivered the dispatch within two days of my order. Unfortunately, the item I ordered was broken in its case and its flushed the entire carton. I couldn't use the product since it was poorly packed. I got twenty spatulas and one cleaning oil with the package which was

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spoiled because of the cream that

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on it. I was totally disappointed by seeing that. I cannot believe your company with these many years of reputation is actually not caring about your customer's and their products. Since I cannot use it at any cost I am going to return my product. I am not looking for an exchange in return. All I want is the return of my money into my account at the earliest. I am sorry to say that I totally lost my trust

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extra care in your company's packaging section. Because we, the customers are trusting you blindly when we order something from your site. Please don't break that contract. Sincerely, Name Signature

Mon Jan 06 2020

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order number
shipment
delivery
damaged
defective
package
request
replacement
refund
customer support
awaiting your prompt response
solution
photos attached
upon inspection
apologies in advance

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